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the new jen series 02 by ~claytes:iconclaytes:

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okay, here's another shot of jen. i've decided i'm only going to post two of these (even though they are very similar). no point in putting up a bunch of not-as-good-as-these few shots. as for the dutch angle.. don't even ask what i was thinking. i hate canted angles in general.

again, let me know your honest thoughts. next shoot i need to do a much better job! we'll chalk this one up as a loss (mostly) and concentrate on the next one :)

canon 20d in raw, 3 lights and 2 flags, photoshopCS

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the new jen series 01 [link]
the new jen series 02
the new jen series 03 [link]

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`hyper-psycho Jan 27, 2006, 9:07:01 AM
i really like the framing of this shot
well done

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~Inguz Jan 27, 2006, 9:21:41 AM
Hey, what exactly is a dutch angle?

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~claytes Jan 27, 2006, 10:02:45 AM
ask my boss!
haha.. sorry inside joke... um, crooked canted not straight tilted at an angle dutch :)

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!lilbarbie Jan 27, 2006, 11:13:52 AM
I like the tension between the dark and the light areas.
The angle makes this more dinamic.
But I like the lighting on the other one better... You could see her freckles :D

Again, me giving you a critique feels awful strange. :blushes:

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~claytes Jan 27, 2006, 11:30:51 AM
why strange? critique from anyone helps. these photos are not that great. they may be better than many people could do, but keep in mind i do have a nice camera and good lens and some good lights and stands. i'm sure if you handed these tools to any person, 75% of them could get shots like this. comparing these shots i've taken to, say, something printed in a magazine and i almost feel embarrased! i mean, i'm trying to improve. it's a process.

thanks for your comments :)

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~Nouli Jan 27, 2006, 11:32:43 AM
I love taking pictures in that angle.
Not a lot of people see the "beauty" of it! Sadly
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~Nox-Aquarius Jan 27, 2006, 11:36:40 AM
I like the first one better. Shes looks angry.

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~Inguz Jan 27, 2006, 11:44:37 AM
excellent, I love learning something new every day. And this has been my tidbit of the day. Dutch angles. I wonder why "dutch" though, a stoned photographer in Amsterdam? ;)

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