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this couple was digging into their eyes, fishing for something, for minutes. i watched and watched and couldn't figure out if they really had stuff stuck in their eyes or were just acting. it was a very interesting sight! people would pass, nobody would notice, except me. i probably shot like 20 pictures before they finally moved along.

amsterdam, holland

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:iconilter:
nice to see this one here, as i thought and said this is my fav from your website.
btw i read your 2nd journal, yes i wish all could spend more time here, but there is too much other work to do when photography is a just hobby for someone but not a profession.. anyway, cheers,

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ilter
:iconclaytes:
haha yes i thought of you when i posted :D
i understand where you are coming from.. those thoughts were directed towards the people who do spend lots of time on the site.

have a nice night!

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Clayton Hauck
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:iconreddiva:
haha thats really weird- i like the story... love black and white photography :D

i like how the 2 people are in focus and the others blurry, makes it seem like you've captured them in their own private moment. i thikn the level of detail in the foreground (the bikes) are a little distracting, but its not too bad, it just draws away from the couple.

i wonder what was going on... maybe they were crying and trying to cover it up... i know my boyfriend does that sometimes in sad/mushy movies.... trying to pretend he doesnt cry.... such a crock!

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:icongonzale:
very peculiar !
well seen :)
:iconau-courant:
this photo looks great in black and white.
:icontwimx:
nice one ; )

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:iconsundreaming:
this is a good one. I'd definitely work on the lights, contrast, textures (love those shadows)... but that's me =)

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:iconareml:
great shot. i like all the movement.

when were you in amsterdam?

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yes, and you my friend are a master at that!

i'm sure it could use some more work, but i'm failry pleased at where it is right now. it's just a simple street shot, i don't want to get too fancy with it.. sometimes that takes me out of the moment. i felt like maybe boosting the contrast, but i like where the two subjects are at right now. the bg is kind of down in comparison, and i like how that makes them stand out a touch more. if anything, that lone bike behind them is bothersome. did you have anything specific in mind? short of revealing any trade secrets, of course! :D

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Clayton Hauck
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Sep 7, 2005, 1:44:01 AM

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